Posted by - on June 17, 2003 at 00:46:05:
In Reply to: Cabrillo Chocolate Lobster Dive posted by Jeff Shaw on June 16, 2003 at 23:14:28:
"Hey board..." Comment... do not use hey (very bad).
"The Chocolate Lobster Dive is approaching, Since my spouse is the Cahirperson, I got the web job."
Comment... First comma gets period. Chairperson, spelling incorrect.
"Please report any flubs, typos or other Foo to me."
Comment... or should be and Foo is not a word and no cap.
"Hope to see you there . This years proceeds go to buildind the Aquatic Nursery. We are even gonna have a special night for the divere to preview when the project is done."
Comment... building incorrect spelling gonna should be going to have divers incorrect spelling
preview what use of grammar plus run on sentence.
I have not gotten to correcting the site yet.
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